Tuesday, November 3, 2009

What is and What Should Never Be, by Layla Gregory 34 pages
Chapter II Dazed and Confused

In this chapter Rosie is taken to the Whiskey a-go-go by the popular Marc Lyret for her sixteenth birthday August 20,1969.After being led out into the alley way she almost gets rapped that is when she meets Robert Antony Bolan whom rescues her from Marc.She discovers he is a very kind man,but very troubled.He takes her into the mens bathroom back in the Whiskey a-go-go and cleans her up.This more so is the chapter that shows what fate might be ,but its almost three chapters away from where fate is already written.

This chapter really took me forever to write because of its content originally it was really heavy,good ,but it was to much there have been many Phases of this chapter.It has now been transformed from it's orginal state of her getting rapped by Marc Lyret in the alley way to almost getting raped.The first addition of this book was slightly different from how it turned out,but after I wrote this chapter I was able to keep working on the novel chapter after chapter flowed out of me dismissing the trivial questions, no matter what they might be.The complex world of words laced together into a tapestry of imagination and tragedy was bornl.

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